Wednesday, 8 August 2018

Improving my blog comment

Improving my blog comment.

This lesson was to fix some of the words that didn't make sense or sounded wrong in our blogs, the highlighted words are things i've improved.

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  1. Unknown10 August 2018 at 08:43

    Kia ora Alfie
    Thanks for sharing your good ideas about how to improve your blog comment - good discussion! Did you find this reflection task useful? Why? Why not?
    Koka Jo

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  2. Anonymous12 September 2018 at 08:54

    Kia ora Alfie, I see that you have put a lot of thought into the improved blog comment. You have made great points about the gifs, I find them distracting too. Remember to get someone to check you writing - I notice you have use the word quiet instead of quite.
    Mrs Krausse

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